He pauses between keys… his fingers tender o’er the notes that write my life….they rest/ arrest me;

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my black-white days, the touch that sustains…. I’m listening and every breath mine, every sigh is the song he sings as if he is the rhythm/ the beat of my rhyme
no he refrains from letting me go/ go to my own translations of words/ of lyrics and life
his chord unbreaks wakes pursues like a Linger, it repeats/repeats his lines…
He pauses between keys… his fingers tender o’er the notes that write my life….they rest/ arrest me, just in time.

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This is lovely. One can almost see you listening moving your head slightly to each key stroke. The in between the touching softly of the keys. Really beautiful. Hope you have a blessed day. Love Joni πΈπΊππ
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Blessed day to you too Joni. Yes God has His ways of reaching the keys of our lives. So glad for that.π
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Yes indeed he does. Have a blessed week my sweet friend. Blessings to you and your kind family. Love π Joni
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The B/W picture is very pixellated – deliberate?
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Yes
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Is an ‘Unsplash site ‘
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That is so beautiful. It reminded me a little of Gerard Manley Hopkins’s poetry style.
Your FMF neighbour #29
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I hadnt known of Gerard MH, or this form of writing. Did the repeats, because that’s what a refrain is? π thankyou so much for showing me something here. Always a joy to know more about writing forms. And oh I so love your title!πthankyou for being here.
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Will look at 29π»
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Love the poem, you always pick perfect graphics too
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Thankyou so muchπ·.Always a joy to hear it resonates. Ah yes, grateful for graphic provision. π
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It is in the pauses between
that we can hear
the angels sing…
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“In the pauses we hear angels sing…” these lines inspire another post! How beautiful.
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There’s a soundtrack to my days
that keeps me in fine fettle;
the gramophone inside me plays
lots of heavy metal.
The chimes toll, I know it well,
they make my heart run free,
these opening notes of Hell’s Bells,
the best from AC/DC.
And here’s another, very apt,
for life’s gone to the limit;
it’s a fighting song by Trapt,
and the refrain is “Bring it!”
Rounding out this glorious score
is what Grafiti Ghosts live for.
And, if I may, here’s the Youtube link to Graffiti Ghots, “This Is What I Live For”.
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This is creative and beautiful. I momentary respite from the noise of the day. Thank you for this lovely thing.
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Very in touch!πβοΈβοΈ
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America on Coffee, thankyou so much!
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πβοΈβοΈπ
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